17/365 Torstein

Oh damn I can't tell how much it looks wonderful to me.
And by the way, I'm french and I hope you will understand evrything c:
Ok, let's start this critique heh

So fisrt of all, I really love what I see. The colors match together, we understand what we see and the full picture is really nice and soft. This landscape is really relaxing to me and the choice of this point of view looks perfect. They are not too many details, the shadows, lights and proportions looks okay.

Well, it's hard to tell what is original and what is not with a landscape because you were surely inspired by something else. Mountains are not so original by the way. We can find them everywhere and I also paint a lot of mountains. But what I find original is the fact that your landscape really looks like a landscape from a movie -especially fantasy movies- and this is why I give you a correct note for the originality. The note also have something to do with the technique so just go ahead.

The technique is really good! I mean, it's not fully-detailed and it looks a bit like a sketch -we can see a lot of colors that are not perfectly integrated with other colors. But the fact is that I can't give you a bad note because it would be stupid. Your technique is correct and the picture offers a warm and soft sensation. All the painting would absolutely not be the same if all this marks were different. Your technique is also original and very pleasant for my eyes so don't change anything!

Finally, I can't say anything bad for the impact. I really love this picture and even thought they are some bad points, this thing just caught my eye and I can't say I'm not in admiration in front of it because it would be a huge lie c:

This is a really great job; I love the colors, the details you added, the maneer colors are disappearing in the horizon... Just keep doing wonderful works like this one! And thanks for sharing such great works!